Johanna or Louisa?

What about the miscarriage? Nah, can’t figure out what to say. I can see a hospital room and a view over the east river. Maybe it was Doctor’s? Maybe it was Cornell? I don’t think it was NYU or Bellevue.

Johanna was there for four days. It would have been longer but she walked out. As miscarriages go it wasn’t so bad physically. The horror to Jo and Grace was that she was seven months pregnant and it was a still birth and the embryo fetus thing (as Jo called it) had died almost a month earlier. It had been a boy. And Jo couldn’t conceive again and Grace couldn’t conceive at all. And really when Jo was raped a month later they were glad she didn’t and couldn’t.

And both of them decided that they hadn’t been made for kids, and then heart attacks.

And then no more Jo. And then a kitten who died. And then an old dog: a brindle bully bitch Grace found. She had a tag that said “lulu” but there was no phone number. And then she died.

And that’s when Grace decided that she’d find a pup. And she picked the breed at random, but never regretted it. Loulou was perfection. Asleep next to her. Eating what she offered, nuzzling her. Clearly speaking in his doggish incomprehensible way. Really each moment with him reminded her more and more of Jo. To hell with the land lords.

One morning she woke up knowing that the dog needed more exercise. She took him over the Tri borough bridge this time, and for he first time unclipped the leash. Off he went, and ten minutes later he reappeared, with a duck in his mouth. A still warm dead duck. Grace had a knife and very little idea what to do. [this is where I might come up with a description of plucking a duck?]

How about descriptions of summer and winter on Randall’s. Pity they will never be in the same league as the cold in soldier’s joy and the crispness of the air and the smoke from the cigarette under the banjo strings.

Well at least I can see Loulou showing up with the duck, and Grace’s dismay. Great that he caught it. How had he managed? Is that when she realized how wet and filthy the dog was – remnant of his chase into the water. Guess he could swim. What else that day? Did she hear anything from the duck or dog telling her what he was up to? What could she hear? A splash?

Or had he disappeared then reappeared silently almost unmissed?

The next time he was off lead he padded along by her side, occasionally his nose picked up a scent and his body would quiver. He’d be standing perfectly still. Sometimes the quiver was so subtle she could only feel it and not see it at all.


More of Loulou’s thoughts

Now to describe a thinking dog.

Loulou knew that Grace was dead. She smelled like meat. She didn’t move.

The children had given him am anxiety free chance.

He remembered Grace. He missed her. Every time he thought of her his tail wagged. But now there was Renie and Pam. They argue but not so seriously about whose bed he will sleep in.

It’s not really an issue because he already knows that most of the time he will sleep at their door.

He dragged his bed there as soon as they went to theirs.

The mother laughed when she saw that. She gave him another biscuit.

He got up and retrieved his new toy. Finally he could relax.

His eyes closed. He slept.

That’s a thought for the dog.

The bedroom: as you come in the floor to ceiling, or at least large, window to your right and across from you.

Let’s say the window faces west. Then the door is at the north end of the east wall.

There is a bed on each of the north and south walls. Each is at the west end of the wall.

At the east end of the south wall is the door to the closet. It’s a walk in. But not so large.

There are two dressers on the east wall both low.

There’s a rug at the center of the floor.

The dog dragged his bed to the hall way in front of the girls’ bedroom door. He’s sleeping peacefully now. The girls wonder if they should wake him when they need to go pee.

The answer is clear, he wakes and thumps his tail as Renie walks towards him. He stands and stretches then smiles.

She walks by and he gets up and follows her. Once she reaches the bathroom he walks to a spot where he can observe both the bathroom and the girls’ bedroom. Once Renie is back he settles again at the bedroom door. He is asleep instantly.

The girls are gently snoring within a few minutes.

Loulou gets up and wanders through the apartment. It’s less aimless than you might think.

He checked each window and each door. Yes of course he checked for entrances but also he knew to familiarize himself with the apartment’s natural scents.

He wandered into the girls’ room again. They slept.

That’s when he trotted with purpose to Her room. He plopped down at the foot of her bed and was fast asleep in 10 seconds.


Loulou’s thoughts

Now back to Grace Stroud. She and Louisa, for whom Loulou is named, had had two dogs. Both large. Both male. Both pits. Then they’d had no pets. Louisa’s lungs were weak. A clean house was necessary. A house with no hair. Grace had cut hers short, so that she’d shed less. She’d vacuumed twice and more daily. She dusted. Still, too much dust or what have you. Louisa Mendes, oxygen tank, humidifiers, filters. The second bedroom practically a clean room. Still, too much for her. Every breath painful. For years. Louisa hadn’t smoked. Louisa didn’t have tuberculosis. But something had gone wrong. She had constant pneumonia, constant obstructions. She wheezed.
Every breath so harsh she cried. No, not HIV. Her immune system was fine, and it wasn’t PCP any way. Ordinary bacterial pneumonia, and viral pneumonia. Perhaps not constant. There’d be months free of it. But those months, allergies? Who knew? Not her doctors.

Louisa Mendes had died five years ago. Loulou adopted one week after the room was cleared out.

Now there were dog beds, and Grace still vacuumed twice daily. But now she had Loulou who didn’t cough, but didn’t speak either.

And now she had nothing.

Loulou had been a smallish pup. His mother hadn’t eaten well. Three of the puppies in the litter had died within hours of birth. Loulou had noticed the number of smells decreased. Then smells changed. Harsh. But the bed was softer. Then he went outside with all his sibs. There were still eight siblings. All bigger than he. Nope, he was bigger than four of them now. A while later there were no sibs. Just Grace. And that was wonderful. Sometimes Grace left him alone, and he’d sleep. More often though he and Grace were together. They walked slowly often, because Grace fell down occasionally. He just knew that this was because she foolishly walked on only two of her legs. But he’d realized early on that Grace did a number of silly things. She covered her poor bare hide with cloth (which never quite smelled of her). She’d never developed reasonable callouses on her feet, even the two she walked on, and put things on them when she went outside. Although, when there were spiky things on the ground, the foot thingies made a lot of sense. Also, when it was really hot or cold.

Her nose didn’t work either. She never seemed to know who had been around. She certainly couldn’t tell when a place was too filthy to eat at, or had been cleaned with revolting substances.

She didn’t have much appreciation of rotten either. You could learn a lot about an animal from what its rotting relative, scat, or food smelled like. That made it just so much easier to catch it. At least, it became easier to trace the animal, and to know whether it was worth eating. Sometimes they weren’t.

He’d been overjoyed the few times she’d eaten what he caught for her. After all, usually she fed him. It was only fair that he return the favor.

Once he’d brought her a fish from the river.

That had been fun.

Once she’d taken him to the ocean. That wasn’t a word he knew, yet he did know that this vast expanse was different even from the salt water by Randall’s.




There’s something totally odd. What is it? He wasn’t quite awake and the smells were different. The sounds were off. What had happened?

He opened his eyes, knowing suddenly that the oddity was that anything at all was the same.

Yet he’s awake in a strange place. His Grace wasn’t here. He knew she’d never be here. He whimpers.

A light smell, constant in the room now gets stronger. A little like his Grace.

A soft voice, “oh Loulou, poor boy. C’mere.”

He pulls himself to his feet and lumbers toward the coach. He leans into the almost familiar smell. Her hand moves to his neck, his chin, his chest. He’s relaxed.

“Poor boy. You’ve had a rough time. What a long day for you. It’s all right. We’ll keep you happy.”

— that’s a passage about the dog. I think it’s only clear from the name. Certainly that’s my intention.

What I saw when writing was Luca under the table twitching. But this dog could be asleep anywhere that’s not by a couch.

There’s a bit missing. The part where Loulou is scared of abandonment at the groomer.

Another version of the letter

Back to Tricia (Treesha?, Trisha?) the QA queen. Notice that the girls didn’t know she knew about dogs. But yes she does. Or did.

As a child, her first beloved book had been /wild animals I have known/. Ernest Thompson Seton. A few things stayed with her: all wild animal stories end in tragedy; Seton said that repeatedly. And implicitly Seton said something else: animals are sentient. They’re feeling beings. They’re individuals. She’d always remembered that.

Whenever she saw a squirrel in the park, or a pigeon on the street, knowing it must be unique, she searched for the qualities which defined its individuality.

By the time she was in her teens birds and rodents all looked no less different than people did. Later, she’d honed her perceptions volunteering at the Humane Society.

All in all, yes. She knew dogs.

So when she met Lou-lou, he knew she knew him. He sighed and leaned into her. She felt him relax, and then she scratched behind his ears.

He was perfect.

Her girls knew it too. They realized as he leaned in that he would follow them home. He’d be theirs.

Of course the girls wouldn’t be the ones walking him, or taking him to the vet, or making sure he was housebroken.

So here we go, she thought. I have a dog.

We have a dog. I hope I can remember how to train them. I hope we can afford the vet.

He sighed again. He licked her hand. He licked again.

Tricia picked up the leash. Reeny and Pam smiled at each other. It had taken til just this moment for it to hit them. They had a dog.

Here’s another thought:

There are neighbors. Not actually in the building ; as we know most of the building was empty. Maybe all of it. But there are neighbors. They are in the nearby buildings. They are all over Pleasant Village.

And back to Grace Stroud.

She’d been married to a woman, who died a few years back. Not ten, that’s too long ago. She’d retired from teaching.

Grace had adopted Loulou as a puppy. She’d taken a cruise to Alaska. She’d stayed a month longer than she’d planned. She met a woman who raced dogs every now and then. They weren’t lovers, the woman was too young, she wasn’t any of Grace’s types. Having dogs around though, that interested Grace. When one of the bitches gave birth, Grace asked for a pup. “That one,” she said, “the curious one.”

Mind you, all huskies are curious, but “that one” was advanced. He walked almost immediately. It was impossible to keep him in with the other puppies.

Even his mother couldn’t keep him penned.

The month turned into two, then three. Finally Loulou was old enough to wean.

Grace took him home.

A day after the murder. The police will call Tricia. They’ll ask her why she took the dog. They’ll ask whether she knew Grace Stroud.

They’ll accept her answer, they won’t bother her about the dog, but they’ll give her the vet’s number. “Miss Stroud left a letter. She wanted the dog taken care of, and it seems like you’re doing that.”

Grace’s letter. To whom it may concern: You’ve found this, so something has happened to me. I have no money except for the accounts you’ll find in my desk. My will is there too.

If Loulou (he’s my dog) has not been harmed, please try to find him a home. He’s better with women than with men.

Please find him a home.

I have some jewelry. It’s in the top drawer of the chest in the large bedroom.

The will:

The gist: Any property to the Humane Society. The dog’s stuff to his adopter. The jewelry and silverware is among the property that the Humane Society gets. It’s probably worth selling.
The furniture isn’t valuable, it’s IKEA. Not very interesting. The clothing isn’t valuable either. Clothing, furniture, dishes – all can be donated or sold.

The insurance assessment: Silver gravy boat Silverware service for 20 Silver salad fork and spoon

1 Platinum and emerald necklace 1 Platinum and diamond ring inscribed Grace and Jen, now and forever 1 emerald and gold bracelet 2 large squash blossom necklaces 1 bracelet of three strands of gold: all reddish 1 large platinum cuff

4 Navaho rugs, each 4 feet by 6 feet all four wool, all four gray.
1 rug, cream and black zig zags on gray 1 rug, stick figure people 1 rug, cream, red, black 1 rug, cream, red, black

Glassware – 2 reidel white

Mostly Reeny and Pam, somewhat Loulou

Pamela and Reeny redux.

Reeny isn’t actually all that interested in science or mathematics – she is “good” at math. Really what Reeny wants is to make things with yarn. Clothing of course. She’s been knitting and crocheting since she was only eight. But clothing – except when it’s for one of her constructions – doesn’t quite fill the urge. Her constructions vary. Sometimes it will be a box, with figures inside. She’ll dress the figures even when they aren’t human, even when their agency is compromised. She knit a mountain last month, and she has started to realize that constructing shapes is the most fun.

What she liked best about clothes was knitting in the round. That just worked specially. It has occurred to her that fine lace could be an interesting arena for working out representations of emotions. Maybe a good arena for topology.

Topology is the part of mathematics she actually likes of course. Some times an approach to a problem plays itself to her. When it does, she listens inwardly and tries to capture the sounds. They describe shapes and surfaces.

Pam wants to be a vet, or a dolphin, or a singer … or or or. The harbor school, with its emphasis on marine biology iniatially will seem perfect. The intense scrutiny of the teachers, combined with the isolation, will leave her believing – at least for a little while – that she simply has to stick with marine biology.

Later, in college, she’ll fall in love with proteins. She’ll start talking to Reeny, who will laugh about the ability they both have to perceive structure.

Later still, she’ll do doctoral and post-doctoral work in Melbourne. The whole time she’ll be seeing dolphins’ and orcas’ DNA. But she’ll be composing protein structure. She will more and more dream in shapes and not images. Her shapes are a language of protein structure.

When their mother comes to pick them up.

“Ma – ” Pamela is sure that her mother will help with the dog. “Ma – we have to keep him. We’ve got to!l”

“His name is Lou-Lou and he’s friendly,” chimed in Reeny.

The dog padded over to her. He leaned into her leg.

She reached down to his chin. He gave a sigh and seemed to melt.

“Ok ok we’ll try him.”

“He isn’t Hachi” Reeny said. “Nothing at all like that. “

“Hachi wasn’t so healthy,” her mother smiled. All we can do is try.

The cops are confused by an old woman, apparently complete healthy, who landed on a tree.

Reeny and Pam


She wants to write a history of the world. Sometimes the history expands: a description and history of the solar system, or the universe. At those moments she almost can see the universe expand too, and she feels equations beckoning.

Astrophysics calls her then.

Sometimes the history contracts: she’ll watch a word’s form change, hear its vowels shorten or elongate, know how it was first used to describe a phenomenon; feel the original analogies and actions creating a language. For a brief moment she’ll understand why a language is highly inflected, or how another agglutinates. At those times she knows she’s a linguist or archeologist.

Sometimes history contracts still further, and she’ll ache to describe the particulars of a single day, or the actions and perceptions of one being then, and there. That’s when each cloud imprints sharply on her eyes, or she identifies thousands of different scents. That’s when she longs for other senses, each capable of cataloging an instant.

How does scent work, she’ll wonder. How can a chemical hit her nose or tongue and evoke memory and emotion.

Somehow sight is less mysterious.


Like and unlike her sister. That’s the way she’ll describe herself to others. But she’ll think: of course “like” of course “different.” Reeny and I are both people, we are close in age. Of course we are alike. How silly to notice that.

But there is a thread between them. Both have sudden and demanding models that they are compelled to express.

Pamela’s models are almost exclusively visual. They parade in front of her mind’s eye, showing structure. That’s why she’ll go to Melbourne. It’s in Melbourne that she’ll find the doyenne of protein structure. It’s in Melbourne that she’ll finally allow herself to build equipment.

Oddly, she’ll say that it was because of the dog. Loulou’s similarity to herself left her wondering how she differed from him. And every night she’d dream a different shape. At least, each morning she was sure that’s what she dreamed.

How does scent work, Pam would wonder. Why does it work so differently in me than in Reeny, and why does it work so consciously in our hunting friend.

What would scent consciousness be like?

The dog would nap near the girls as each thought mused meandered about how a dog’s nose could be so clear.

What do proteins smell like? Reeny would wonder. What is Loulou’s day like? Does he dream in smells? Does he hear things that evoke smells?

What is Loulou thinking? Pam would ask herself. How do smells shape themselves? Why can he perceive the history of a scent? Does it move? What is its shape?

Loulou’s a dog. His memories trouble him as he sleeps. In the morning sometimes he notices an emptiness that breakfast won’t fill. Reeny would’ve asserted that the hole was Loulou’s memories of Lydia Stroud. She would have said that sometimes the dog remembered, and what he remembered was sorrow.

Pam would have seen, however briefly, the image that memory placed before Loulou.

For both of them, though this would be imagination at work. At least that’s what they’d think.

Reeny did come very close to experiencing memory as Loulou did. Pam came even closer to perceiving the construction of memories. That would be her work: the chemical structure of memory.

Reeny would daydream about the disciplines she’d need to write her history of the world or of a day. Would she be able to extrapolate from a day to the entire life of the cosmos? Would it work the other way?

Pam would find Hermetic philosophy and pass it along to her older sister. “This is what you’ve been telling me: the larger holds and reflects the smaller. As above, so below.” Pam was joking though, she thought it entirely nonsense. Will Reeny agree? Reeny wants to find correspondences. Reeny wants all histories to be one history. Of course then particular moments will demand her attention, and she’ll know yet again that each difference is a universe itself. “Is everything fractal?” was the question she asked herself for more than two years.

Is nothing fractal? How long is the coastline? Can I hear a new cove? Where is it?

“Honestly” she said to her mother one morning: “honestly, why don’t people accept tiny differences construct our daily interactions? Why are people so grumpy when today and yesterday differ? Why the fear of change?”

After all, we age in one direction. Maybe two would be more fun, but our senses don’t work like that. If they did we’d be different. What’s the problem?

Dramatis Personae 2


More characters:

Nola Rodgers the banker. Nola is happiest when things match. She finds mismatches, and then fixes them. For her, fixing them can mean nagging new people, or it can mean throwing out old files and forms. Fixing things can involve phone calls – she’s always loved the telephone, falling so nicely between the impersonal email and the personal speech. Loves phone calls. She’s torn though about whether she can figure out the problems to be fixed best in person, or over a computerized form. How lovely it is to decipher the meaning of someone’s handwriting, to understand their very selves through an external sign! So if Manda and Juan-Carlos and Maybelle had just brought her a beautifully filled in, correctly filled in, perfect form she’d have been delighted.
It hasn’t ever been her job (or her desire) to fill in the meaning behind the forms. The pristine paper, or pixels, now painted with clear facts, soothes, quiets, fulfills. The rage she has felt at people who harm her paper -crossing out letters, blotting the sides, dripping coffee: our villains do none of this. They are nothing if not neat. Nola would have happily let there papers through, giving them a new loan, permitting them any money at all, just so long as her papers were clear.

LouLou the husky. Despite the name, LouLou is male. He’s about 7, with clear dark eyes, bright white teeth, pointed ears. His eye-mask: gray, the rest of his face: creamy. Dorsal – black; ventral – cream. He saw the children and the misery of losing Grace began to recede. They weren’t Grace, no one would ever be his grace again; but they were lovely. They smelled just right. Grace ran him, Grace fed him. He was hungry and tired, and the girls needed him. He knew that. Once their mother appeared, he relaxed completely. She’d guard him, he’d guard her, the children would be fed.

Tricia the QA demon. Mother of two. Tired. Did I say tired? Did she? Oh so tired. And now, just when she’d hoped everything had been organized, called from the office. Accused of some sort of misery? The girls should’ve stayed home. Of course why had she ever expected that! Deep snow, easy access to the island. Oh of course, and now a dog. Tricia had gotten pregnant and aborted. She’d been very young. The father much older. The father, her teacher. The father long since gone.

Then, twenty years later, pregnant again, a daughter. And two years after, again. Another daughter. (Jonella and Makayla) How perfect. QA: organizing tests. What could be better? Deriving order from chaos. Just like at home. Organizing the insanity of dolls and stuffies and models and clothes.

And in the office, she carved out her niche, and led the developers gently to test themselves. She prided herself on agility. The pun brought out a smile. As always. Her jokes were tiny quivers that cleared corners, and then whole rooms. Once each room was clear, with open windows, she’d fill it with the furnishings of working software, of peaceful children. Her rooms, her jokes, her clarity.

And what had the girls found? A dog? A body?

What would the dog do in her clean rooms, her ordered home? How could a dog mess things up?

She had wanted a dog since before the girls were born. She’d wanted a dog since she’d been a girl herself. She’d dreamed of Lad. She’d imagined Flush as hers. Never wanted Robert Browning, but oh that spaniel Flush.

Here was a large dog, black, fierce, and yet, curled around her daughters. She’d never seen such a grin before. Apparently he’d adopted them. Her too. She saw the tail wag. The pink tongue emerged and licked a foot and then her daughter.

So much for some main characters. Back to an outline.

The landlords, having lost quite a lot (Madeoff? something different) losing their own home, have decided that the very best solution will be to turn their other building into a co-op and to renovate it. But Grace Stroud was stabilized. So they decided to kill her. They looked up murder in books. Manda decided that Maybelle would lure Grace somewhere, and Juan-Carlos would hit her with a stick And then they’d drop her off on Randall’s Island.

The way they’d manage the dog? Grace walked to a yoga class every day. She’d be away from the dog. Then, once they’d dumped her, they’d open the door to the apartment, the dog would be lost, they’d have no more trouble.

Well that might work. It might.

If not that: Grace took the dog for runs often. Maybe they could trip her and she’d fall.

If not that: surely Grace would drink a sample coffee?


Jonelle and Makayla. I’m renaming them, Right now. When I can think of something I like better than Pamela and Irene.

Ok, they’re 12 and 10. They’re smart. They love dogs. That’s why they’re going to adopt Lou-Lou. They have mostly gone to the same school, but won’t go to the same high schools. Jonelle who is now Irene, or even Reeny, is going to go to the Manhattan Center for Science and Technology. Pamela, who used to be Makayla, and may still be, is going to go to the High School For American Studies at Lehman College. Unless she goes to a different high school entirely. Maybe at NY Harbor School. I like that idea, marine biology.

So Jonelle is Reeny. She’s about to attend the Manhattan Center for Science and Technology, because she skipped a grade. Pam also skipped. In both cases this leaves them quite a bit younger than the other kids in their classes – Pam is in 6th grade, she’ll be 11 in July. Reeny is in 8th grade, she’ll be 13 in September. Right after she starts high school.

Nope got this wrong. Reeny is already at Hunter, where she’ll stay. Pam will end up at Harbor School. Leaving early early early in the morning. Begging her ma for a down town home.

That won’t happen.

Meanwhile our Lydia Stroud. Here’s the first part of the investigation.

Cop 1 She wasn’t a driver and she wasn’t even that old. Cop 2 Huh – how do you know? Cop 1: The non-driver’s license. She’s eighty-five. Cop 2: That’s old! Cop 1: No, it’s not. My grandmother is 85 and she’s no where like old. But have you looked her up yet? Cop 2: What’s the name again? Cop 1: Lydia Stroud. Cop 2: McCann! Look up Lydia Stroud Cop 1, who is now and forever Celli: Wilson, I asked you – not McCann.
Cop 2, who I suppose we are now calling Wilson: Yeah Yeah. McCann, found anything?

McCann lumbers back to the first two cops wearing a funny smile

“She has one arrest. June 28 1969. You’ll love this. Also some press on it. ” Wilson said “Why will I love this?

McCann laughed. “Because. Just, because. It’s really funny.” “McCann, Please just tell me. I haven’t got all day” Wilson sighed.

McCann: “I’ll give you hint. June 28, 1969. C’mon, parade duty! Don’t you remember? Last year?” Wilson: What the? She was arrested at Stonewall? McCann: Yeah. Apparently she was “The Littlest Lesbo” in the Post. Pretty girl.
Celli: Anything else McCann? You done leering at the corpse’s baby pictures? McCann sighed. “C’mon Celli, I’m not leering. This is legit, she wasn’t a babe, but she was kind of cute. No, she doesn’t have a record except this one drunk and disorderly. Interesting that she gave her real name though.”

“Yeah. Whatever. Anything else? Like an address?” Celli, looked down at the id. “Because I don’t trust this.”

Wilson: “You should. I did a lookup on the building on the id. 116th and Pleasant”


The cops eventually got to 116th and Pleasant. The building was in lousy shape, and looked abandoned. The lights were out in the hallway. One pane in the front door was shattered. Lydia Stroud’s apartment was a small two bedroom on the ground floor. One bedroom was a study, the other clearly a sanctuary of sorts.

There was a dog bowl in the kitchen, and a crate in the larger bedroom. There were dog beds in the living room and the smaller bedroom.

The walls varied. In living room, pale green with white trim. In the kitchen a golden yellow. One bedroom was lavender (“What’d’ya expect from the littlest lesbo?!”), the other blue. The bathroom had a bamboo wallpaper and a bowl of potpourri.

There was a file cabinet right by the desk. It was unlocked, there wasn’t much in it either.

One file: “landlords” Another: “Joanna” A third: “Lou-lou” The fourth: “Stuff”

“Stuff” contained a will, with a cover letter of sorts.

The letter: If you read this, I’m dead.
My executor, as named in the will is Jimmy Calletti. He’s a lawyer. The address is on the will. I don’t have much, my concern is Lou-lou.
Please don’t kill him. If you can’t find an adopter, give him to a no-kill shelter. The little I’ve got is for whoever gets him.

I don’t have parents or siblings. Joanna and I didn’t have children.

There’s just Lou-lou. Please don’t let him get hurt.